Pulling her now, by the throat, from whatever
may distract her — squirrels, runners, a ball
bouncing, birds in the grass — a clean jerk
of the leather loop, buckle and chain,
tethered shortly to his side,
if that's anything like
what we need from each other — loyalty, or
the right kind of focus — to anchor the leash
in his left, the other to grip more gently
for slack, should she need it,
to nose in the dirt,
or to yank her from another, more fierce, who
would end her — to know a jump or the faintest
growl means another quick snap — Hey, that's not
how you say hello . . . him saying, as if she were a child.
This is so nice--very satisfying. The voice is a bit different. It's not ethereal; it's very grounded. And you even managed to get a squirrel in there!
ReplyDeleteAnd yet I like the subtle sense of allegory to the imagery. And the "you" of your poems is really powerful ("if that's anything like / what we need from each other")...the way the poem's eye turns from an object/event to the other.
ReplyDeleteI'm happy that this came through - this maybe not-so-subtle allegory, which I'm learning from guys like Carl Phillips.
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